The 2nd Modern Kigo Project Competition

SPRING Season’ 2022 WINNERS 


(Réka Nyitrai & Alan Peat)

1st place WINNER

simonj (UK)

KIGO: crakesticks


crakesticks: a dialectal word for a crow’s nest; a near global phenomenon, Spring in a temperate climate; something new arising from the old. 



the brush pulls tight

in her tangled hair

Alan Peat’s comments:

Both the kigo and the haiku intrigued me. The use of a dialect word (in this instance from Yorkshire, United Kingdom) as a kigo really appeals to me, allowing it to fly far beyond its original geographical location! Crakesticks works beautifully in the context of a haiku as it merges both the sound of a crow’s / rook’s nest (crake) with the look of the nest (sticks).

The final two lines create an evocative image and the alliteration is deftly handled.

Réka Nyitrai’s comments:

What I value most is the poet’s boldness in proposing a dialect word for the kigo and pairing it with an everyday image. The end result is both fresh and memorable. I also like that the poet left plenty of white space to be filled in by the reader. 

Joint 2nd place RUNNER-UP

Hifsa Ashraf (Pakistan)

KIGO: moth nap 


Spring is the season of transformation;  it affects night sleep by causing short/insufficient sleep which may be depicted as a “moth nap”. 


moth nap—   

drifting from dream

to dream 

Alan’s comments:

There’s a lilting, lullaby-like feel to this haiku which works so well. And the choice of the nocturnal moth for the kigo further adds to the whole. The idea that our dreams work in a different timescale to reality also added a touch of surreality—many dreams in a single ‘moth nap’!

Réka’s comments:

The imagery of a moth nap(ping) is enigmatic. I particularly like that the poet  constructs the imagery of her kigo around a moth rather than a butterfly. 

Joint 2nd place RUNNER-UP

Benjamin Blasi (Switzerland)

KIGO: closing canopy


The kigo refers to the regrowth of leaves in deciduous forests in Spring when the canopies become more opaque and less light reaches the ground.


closing canopy

a dark butterfly is falling

through a sunfleck

Alan’s comments:

There’s a universality to this kigo and it offers so many possibilities for poets. The unusual association of darkness with Summer really lifts both the kigo and the resulting haiku. What light there is in the poem is merely a ‘fleck’. This haiku will stay with me—to have found such darkness in the light was novel without in any way being gimmicky. That’s quite an achievement. 

Réka’s comments:

What captured me was the haiku as a whole. The riotous greenness of the closing canopy, matched with the imagery of a butterfly falling through a fleck of sunlight, offered me a memorable visual image.  

3rd place 

Marcie Wessels (USA)

KIGO: peep-toe shoes


Spring is a season of transitions; heavy winter boots are packed away and a new wardrobe is brought out. For some, this includes peep-toe shoes. A peep-toe is a woman’s shoe with an opening in the toe box which allows the toes to show. As a kigo, peep-toe is meant to capture the way all living beings slowly emerge from a period of dormancy and embrace change with cautious hope and optimism.


peep-toe shoes

the eggshell blue nail polish

of an empty nester

Alan’s comments:

Footwear as a kigo—and why not? A lovely link and shift too. The choice of ‘eggshell blue’ amplified the Spring imagery and ‘empty nester’ made for a punchy closure.

Réka’s comments:

Bringing a fashion item into the world of haiku and proposing it as a kigo is bold and confident! I like haiku poets who are original and dashing. 

Honourable mentions:

kjmunro (Canada)

KIGO: migrating swans


Traditionally a Fall kigo in Japan, migrating swans are a symbol of Spring in the Yukon. After a long Winter, ice on the waterways begins to break up, providing resting places for swans & other birds en route to their nesting grounds further north.


whiter than snow sound migrating swans

Alan’s comments:

The monoku is wonderfully handled. It made me pause and think about the sound of snow—both falling and lying snow. The synesthesia is deftly handled and the kigo really appealed—it’s interesting to consider how one country’s Autumn kigo may be another country’s Spring kigo. It’s pleasing to see a poet viewing this as an opportunity rather than a constraint. Beautifully done.

Réka’s comments:

What sound is white? What  sound is whiter even than snow? Does the poet refer to the thrumming sound the swan’s wings make while flying or to the deep, trumpeting “oh-OH” call of the migrating Trumpeter swans? These are the questions I pondered whilst reading this imposing and impressive monoku.

Dan Iulian (Romania)

KIGO: abyssal blue


The color of the clear Spring sky, long seen when you lie on back in the grass, having the feeling that you are floating or sinking, as in a slow fall upward, without time, in a deeper and deeper blue, in which you abandon yourself and nothing matters anymore.


abyssal blue

on the eagle’s wings

the sky so lightweight

Alan’s comments:

When one reads the word ‘abyssal’ the depths of an ocean immediately come to mind. The poet cleverly inverts this image, rendering the sky itself abyssal. The idea that something so huge might be so light also appealed to me. The kigo is ‘open’ enough to provide poets with a multitude of possibilities.

Réka’s comments:

I like how the poet describes deep blue! The image of the sky resting on the eagle’s wings, lightly, easily is not only fresh, but memorable, too. 


“Abyss is a pale, bright, blueberry blue with a wisteria undertone.”

Abyss – PPG Paints

These were the submission details for the 2022 Spring kigo competition (results here announced June 16th 2022)

Creeping Sepia: saijiki notes by Alan Summers 1st Kigo Competition

Results of the first ever Kigo Competition:

Results of the first ever kigo competition (January/February 2022)

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